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Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

Hey Rebecca,

It's as if you're sitting on the shore, each stanza a wave, each first line a recognition of its coming to you, and I can imagine you opening your arms to the eventual arrival of each as it they give you life and the water recedes.

Best,

Mahdi

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School of Blue's avatar

'... make me fluid like the water

encasing my secret body

hurtling toward Earth

inside a padlocked star.' -

All this just in one stanza, bedazzles, Rebecca. In the cosmos we are gorgeous as on earth. Love this.

I am away on a hiatus and will dip back in, popping up near a river in France in due course.

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