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Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

Hey Rebecca,

It's as if you're sitting on the shore, each stanza a wave, each first line a recognition of its coming to you, and I can imagine you opening your arms to the eventual arrival of each as it they give you life and the water recedes.

Best,

Mahdi

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

Mahdi! You gave me a poem for a poem!! Honored.

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School of Blue's avatar

'... make me fluid like the water

encasing my secret body

hurtling toward Earth

inside a padlocked star.' -

All this just in one stanza, bedazzles, Rebecca. In the cosmos we are gorgeous as on earth. Love this.

I am away on a hiatus and will dip back in, popping up near a river in France in due course.

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

I will be watching for your return.

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Caroline Mellor's avatar

Thanks for the cosmic interlude! You write beautifully, Rebecca.

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

Thanks so much, Caroline.

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Lonely Robot Theme's avatar

How gorgeous 💕💕💕

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

Thank you.

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Lonely Robot Theme's avatar

You’re so welcome! Thank you also 🖤

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Rea de Miranda's avatar

Ethereal longings. Gorgeous, Rebecca.

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

Thank you SO much.

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Jennifer Wagner's avatar

Oh, this made me smile! Well done!

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

Thanks, Jennifer. So much. I love to make people smile. And wouldn't it be amazing to come back as a donut?

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David Kirkby's avatar

Well, Rebecca, it worked - obviously!

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Rebecca Cook's avatar

Ha! You are always far too kind. (but I love it)

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